January 8, 2008

lost


in a wilderness, deep and hounding
in a river, endless and full of tears
in a day, long and drawn out
in myself, my thoughts and dreams
i'm lost

in a din that's deafening me
in a silence that's threatening me
in a crowd that's smothering me
in a solitude that's chilling me
i'm lost

i've lost the 'i' i knew once

2 comments:

ramesh said...

rather bombastic

naween said...

@ramesh

is it so?